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Conan and Leno and Ethics, Oh My!

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I enjoy Conan O’Brien more than Jay Leno and that clearly influences how I feel about this whole late-night debacle. He’s who I watched when I stayed up late in high school to do homework and he’s who I watched in college when the night was just beginning and he has been who I watched in my young adulthood. When he took over The Tonight Show, I was thrilled, and when his first musical guest was Pearl Jam – my favorite musicians of all time – I knew he understood his demographic exactly.

Or, more accurately, me.

When Conan started making high schoolers and college students laugh in 1993, Pearl Jam was the biggest band in the universe. Now here they were, in 2009, kicking off a new Tonight Show. And that’s not the only musician I can link Conan to, either. Check out this list of the guests and musical guests from his days on Late Night. For me, I take note of some of my favorites, all appearing in just the first two seasons of the show: Radiohead, Blur, Reverend Horton Heat, Weezer, Jars of Clay, They Might Be Giants, Meat Puppets, Better Than Ezra, The Goo Goo Dolls, Lisa Loeb and Nine Stories, and don’t forget Ben Folds Five made its national television debut on Late Night. ((According to the link, this was on December 26, 1995. I wonder if they sang “Brick” with it’s line “Six a.m. Day after Christmas…”)) As for Pearl Jam, blogger Chris Hanaka recalls that they only appeared on Letterman (SNL aside) until they were the premiere musical guests for The Tonight Show in 2009, and I’d argue appearing on Letterman, Conan’s Late Night predecessor, is miles closer to Conan than Leno.

And what of The Tonight Show’s musical guests from that era who I enjoy and are still kickin’ it old school? Pearl Jam, Green Day, Alice In Chains, Incubus, Wilco, Chris Cornell, The Flaming Lips, Weezer, The Brian Setzer Orchestra. And that’s in the show’s first seven months. Check out the whole list here. ((If you ask me, the only real misstep was Creed, but I suppose that’s pretty subjective.)) These bands scream me. I cannot recall musical artists who appeared on Leno because I either tuned out before they came on or I didn’t hear of anyone who really compelled me to watch (or it’s possible I was just unaware or am missing artists in my mind). This roster and the previous Late Night roster help me know Conan is shooting for my demographic and that’s okay with me.

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Elmore Leonard answers my questions

Last week, Elmore Leonard answered reader questions at the Barnes & Noble Center Stage, a message board thread in which prominent writers are given an opportunity to interact with fans. I’ve read a lot about Leonard’s approach to writing, thoughts on writers, and so on that it took me a little while to think of unique questions I wanted to ask. I came up with two sets of five and ended up with all of them answered (even if #9 – which is #4 of Conversation #2 – didn’t really get answered specifically, ‘no’ is still an answer).

You can visit the link above or read the following transcript. I’ve put my original questions in italics, Elmore’s responses in boldface type, and my commentary in [brackets].

Hi Elmore,

I’ve been reading your work since I was fifteen (I’m thirty now) and my friends and family always know when you have a new book coming out soon because I won’t shut up about it. Out of Sight is one of my favorite stories and I wrote an analysis about it for my final examinations to earn my MFA in Creative Writing last spring. I have a few questions for you and I appreciate the time you’re taking to answer my and other peoples’ questions.

1. I enjoy the way you introduce unique, distinct characters and then let them play with each other as the story develops (Tishomingo Blues comes to mind right away).  I wonder if, in your writing process, you first have an idea of events within the story or if you prefer to start with an idea for a character(s)? If you’ve tried both of these approaches, why do you find one more successful than the other?

– The way I approach it, I always start with characters and  then fit them into a situation or place, like a town in Mississippi for example  I usually have an occupation for a character.  Like in Tishomingo Blues, Dennis is the high diver goes who dives off an 80 foot ladder into a 20 foot wide pool that is 9 feet deep. Up on his perch, Dennis witnesses a murder down at the base. So then I think about more characters and give them names and backgrounds.

[This response doesn't surprise me but his approach amazes me. He places such trust in his characters to push the story forward, it's so bold.]

2. Your supporting characters are fun to read about. When you’re creating characters like The Mutt in Pagan Babies, Glenn in Get Shorty, and Arlen in Tishomingo Blues, what helps you create someone who’s memorable and compelling without stealing focus from your main story? Do you have plans for a new short story collection featuring supporting characters? You spoiled me with the tale of Chickasaw Charlie in When the Women Come Out to Dance.

– I don’t want to create an obvious character.  I want an interesting one who the reader will want to know about.  Often they are cast against the obvious type.

– I don’t really write short stories unless someone, like Otto Penzler, asks me.

[He's talking about building a natural intrigue in his characters, a sort of something that makes the reader compelled of their own accord to learn more about them. In essence, he's talking about character charisma. For a guy who cut his teeth delivering short story after short story to the western dime digests for twenty years, I suppose I'd want to move on to something new, too.]

3. Given your enjoyment of the film adaptations of Get Shorty and Out of Sight, did the thought of seeing satisfying film sequels spur you at all to write Be Cool and Road Dogs? If not, what compelled you to re-visit Chili and Foley?

– Definitely Chili.  I though for sure they’d want another one.  Too bad the sequel was such a terrible movie.  Road Dogs, I don’t think of it so much as a sequel.  I just liked the characters so I used them again.  But if George Clooney wants to play the part, I’m all for it.

[Part of me was afraid this would be perceived as a rude question, like I'm implying he made a cash grab. I'm glad he didn't take it that way because I was genuinely curious. His glib answer about the film adaptation of Be Cool is unabashed and appreciated. Out of Sight is one of my favorite stories, both in novel and film versions, and I'd love to see Road Dogs turned into a film, too.]

4. I’m a big fan of listening to your work as an audio book on road trips (I think George Guidall reading Cuba Libre is particularly excellent). What level of involvement do you usually have in these presentations? What is your favorite audio presentation of one of your books? Do you ever listen to audio books for your own reading pleasure?

– None.

– Never listened to any.

– Never.

[I can't say I'm too surprised, but I really, really like audio books. I "read" more audio books in 2007 than I read in print and I enjoy an excellent audio presentation. I thought Elmore might enjoy them, but I can also see him not taking to this form of technology.]

5. Will we see you in Minnesota any time soon? :smileyhappy:

I wouldn’t mind going to Minneapolis again, but  I have no plans.

[Bummer. Good thing my wife bought me an autographed copy of one of his books in a Minneapolis used bookstore a week ago. But that story is for another blog post. One which will appear here next week, in fact...]

Conversation #2:

Hi Elmore,

Thank you for answering my questions yesterday and everyone’s questions this week, I appreciate it. I came up with a few more, if you’ll indulge me.

1. Where do you like to write and at what time of day? Do you write every day or have some sort of ritualistic behavior when it comes to sitting down to write? How much of your writing time is spent researching or reviewing Gregg’s research?

– In the living room all day, 10-6

– Yes

–I try to read a page or so of a previous book, it could be an old one, just to get in the rhythm of the writing.

–  I’m not sure what percentage of my time, but I always read the pages he sends me.

[Wow, that's commitment! Yeah, he's a professional writer so really, he gets to write for eight hours a day. I'm trying to hold myself to two hours a day, five days a week, this summer and I'm envious. I really like the idea of reading from one's previous works to get the blood flowing, and he does so without thinking of editing. That can be difficult for me because I see so many chances to improve a story. I also like how he makes research a part of his writing time. "Writing time" isn't all writing (though for me, maybe it should be more writing than it currently is) and I don't think it should be; it's also research, reading, editing, and so on.]

2. I’ve read that your Ten Rules of Writing began as a tongue-in-cheek presentation for a speech before revising them for the New York Times. And yet, I wonder which of these rules have been part of your arsenal for the longest? Do you have any particular instances in your writing career when you can identify when a writing rule first manifested for you? Is there one in particular you wish more writers followed?

– “Try to leave out the parts that people tend to skip” and “If it sounds like writing I rewrite it.”

– I think most of the rules came from reading other writers, those that use “suddenly” and “all hell broke loose.”

– That they would use “”said” when indicating dialog and not modify it with an adverb.

[Since Elmore's Ten Rules of Writing originally appeared in the New York Times in 2001 just three days after I turned twenty-two, I have never used any word other than "said" for dialogue. I've since learned two other beloved writers of mine, Neil Gaiman and Stephen King, say the exact same thing. I've put myself in good company. I've also become hyper-aware of "suddenly" throughout the years and I think the leaving out "the parts that people tend to skip" is probably the one thing an aspiring writer should wrap their head around pretty quickly if they want to succeed.]

3. Who did you read when you were first starting out and how did they influence or inspire your work? Who specifically do you recommend an apsiring fiction writer read today and why?

– Hemingway.

– By being very spare in his writing, not overdoing it.

– Cormac McCarthy because he knows how to write.

[I enjoy Hemingway but I don't read enough Hemingway. I enjoy McCarthy but I don't read enough McCarthy. I enjoy Leonard but I don't read enough Leonard. Do you see a pattern developing?]

4. What’s the one question you’re never asked by your fans or in interviews that you wish someone would ask? Of course, you’re welcome to answer that question here, as well. :)

– None comes to mind.

[I based this question off the question Stephen King asked Amy Tan and which gave him inspired direction for his memoir on craft, On Writing. It's my one wild card in the bunch and I'm not surprised he didn't have an answer off the top of his head, though it's a bummer, too. Maybe some day I'll have to come up with the question instead of asking the subject to do my work for me.]

5. What can you tell us about your upcoming novel, Djibouti?

– A documentary film maker is investigating the Somali pirates with a sympathetic point of view and soon finds out that that maybe Al Queda is involved.

[This isn't Elmore's first fictitious visit to Africa (Pagan Babies) and it's clear this topical subject has his full attention. His last few books have returned to characters he's already written about and I believe he's excited to explore this new territory. I'm excited to read it.]

There you have it, a conversation between me and Elmore Leonard, separated by a few hours in time and a few hundred miles in distance but a conversation all the same.

-nm

Creating a Summer Writing Plan, Part III

My summer writing plan in five steps:

1. I have chosen to have a set amount of time to write each day. I think putting in my time will be more effective for me than holding myself to a word count. It’s not that I think I’ll get more writing done this way, it’s that I think I’ll pour more talent into my time if I set it aside to be used instead of wasted. I want to try writing for two hours a day, Monday thru Wednesday and Friday thru Saturday. That’s ten hours a week. If I lose time one day, I make it up another time during the week. I’m down to one job now – this shouldn’t be difficult to do.

2. Thursday mornings are for sending out submissions. I’ll do this every two weeks starting on June 4 and let you know what I’m sending where. Submission day takes the place of a creative writing day, though I’ll be doing technical writing in the form of query letters and database keeping.

3. My writing will be split between short projects, long projects, and priority projects. I’ll work on one until another one calls me, all while leaving room for new ideas to be explored. I’ll do my best not to let this backfire into a situation in which I have a lot written but nothing finished. I’ve detailed my proposed writing projects below.

4. I’m going to challenge myself with challenging projects. I’m going to try tackling more time-consuming projects first (see long projects) and more emotionally-difficult projects (see nonfiction short projects) as soon as possible to challenge myself. The priority projects still stand, since they’re both under deadline.

5. I’m going to have a lot of fun along the way. If I’m not, then I need to stop. Writing cannot be work. Writing cannot be work.

My Priority Projects:

- My Application for something big. I won’t divulge what the “something” is until I hear the outcome, but this needs to get done and get done fast.

- Sketch Comedy for a show I’m writing and acting for in June. It’s The Weekly: Yesterday’s News Today and features sketches written the same week they’re performed that are about current events both local and global. It will be interesting to see how the pacing of this show works and I’m excited to be asked to do some ensemble work.

My Short Story Projects:

- Lucky Seven (fiction, short story), a story that’s gone through two drafts and has been sitting around waiting for a polish so it can make the submission rounds. I dig this story and it deserves to be treated better than I’ve done with it.

- Wing Sauce (fiction, short story) got amazing notes and suggestions from my NCC writer’s group of fellow instructors during the first week of March and has sat on my hard drive ever since. It’s about a car crash and love, and it’s hitting too close to home. After my wife survived a pretty bad car crash with a broken leg mere days after getting workshop notes, there’s a part of me that’s really invested in the story (her, too, because she liked this story when I showed it to her) and there’s a part of me that just can’t work on it right now. My wife goes back to work next week, so I think I’ll go back to the story.

- Meeting Santa Claus (nonfiction, short story) may sound like an odd story to work on in the heat of the summer, but I wonder if writing this and preparing to submit it now sets it up for a better chance to appear somewhere in the Christmas season.

- Her New Scar (nonfiction, short story) is a piece that’s only a few scrawled paragraphs at this point. It’s about my wife’s latest surgery scar from her car accident and other scars from her past. It’s something I think would be good for me to write as we walk away from the accident together.

My Long Projects:

- My Super Secret Screenplay (script) doesn’t have a third act. It needs to be finished, it needs a new draft, it needs new readers, and it needs to be looked at with fresh eyes. I stepped away from it for some time on purpose so I could come back to it when I’m ready. And I’m ready.

- Scrawlers stories, comments, and blogs need to be a regular part of my writing over the summer. I’ve been away from blogging too long and my taste for it has returned. With the new Scrawlers redesign, I’m excited to write and comment there again, too.

- My Super Secret Novel (fiction) probably deserves to be looked at this summer, too, but I’m honestly not in any hurry. I feel like I already have a pretty full load as it is.

So that’s my plan. What’s yours?

-nm

Creating a Summer Writing Plan, Part II

So I’m creating a summer writing plan and I encourage you to join me. I’ve never really done this before and I don’t know if it (I) will succeed, but as one who never churns out as much or as quality material as I want to, I’m open to trying anything new. The best plan is, of course, your own plan. I’ve chosen to create a plan that suits my needs and I invite you to take what works for you. My plan needs a mix of short-term ideas and long-term ideas. Below are some of the things going through my mind as I develop a plan.

Short-Term Ideas I’m Considering:

- Write a specific amount of words OR for a specific amount of time. If I choose the words option, they don’t have to be elegant prose, they just have to be there, finished. If I choose the time option, I don’t have to have a polished gem at the end, I just have to put my time in.

- Set up a regular time slot to send out submission queries. I’m a lazy submitter when it comes to sending my work to magazines and contests, which frankly is ridiculous. This helps me actually get my writing out there.

- Create regular blog updates on my plan. This will help me become beholden to someone.

Long-Term Ideas I’m Considering:

- Choose a mix of both short projects and long projects. I’m not the kind of person who works on one thing at a time very well, though I also have difficulty finishing things. Setting myself up to have a few smaller projects I can finish as well as larger projects that will take more time may be the key.

- Prioritize which projects take the most time and talent. I tend to work on what’s easiest or most interesting first instead of tackling more difficult, more “work”-like projects. I think the opposite approach may be something for me to try.

- Know when other summer activities preclude me from meeting my short-term goals and work them into the overall plan. It’s easy to say, “Gosh, I’ll be on vacation that week so I can’t write,” and then not make it up. This summer, if I can’t meet my regular schedule, I want to do my best to make up the time.

I’ll post my plan tomorrow. What about you? What are some ideas or goals you have for your summer writing plan?

-nm

Creating a Summer Writing Plan, Part I

There’s a part of me that says I should go with the flow and write what comes to me this summer. That planning it out isn’t going to feel spontaneous or even trusting of myself, that I should allow myself complete freedom for maximum creative potential.

Then there’s the part of me that says I should decide now what I want to tackle this summer for writing. That if I don’t have goals I’ll waste time and be too haphazard in my efforts, that a little direction could go a long way in helping me be as succssful as possible.

And then there’s the part of me that says I’ll never finish what I plan but I’ll also never do anything if I don’t make a plan at all. That’s what they call a paradox. And it frustrates me to no end. When all is said and done, I believe I’ll make a summer writing plan that has both short-term and long-term goals with room for spontanaity. My deadline? Thursday. Tomorrow I’ll post some tips on setting up a plan.

What if we make that your deadline, too? Can you post a comment with your summer writing plan when I post on Thursday (or maybe your reason for no plan)? Wouldn’t that be something? The challenge has been issued today. Tomorrow: tips. Thursday: plan. Add your own challenges, tips, and plans in the comments between today and Thursday’s posts.

-nm

My NaNoWriMo 2008 results are… dismal.

National Novel Writing Month has come and gone and for my seventh year straight without a “complete” novel of 50,000 words. The highest word count I’ve ever had was somewhere over 15,000 words. That’s way short of the overall goal but it’s still certainly plenty of writing. And now, dear reader, my grand total for this year’s novel-writing attempt:

Day 13 Goal NaNoWriMo Word Count: 50,000/50,000 (100.0%)

Day 13 Actual NaNoWriMo Word Count: 8,520/50,000 (17.0%)

Word Count Difference: -41,480

Writing Sessions: 7

My Story: Fun and quite unfinished.

My Outlook: …*sigh*…

That’s definitely one of my lowest numbers in my NaNoWriMo history. Thousands of people wrote more than I did in thirty days. That’s a lot of accomplishment I’m not necessarily a part of and that’s a bummer. At any rate, I did what I could with the time I had and that’s okay. I can say without hesitation that November, 2008 was one of my busier months this year (a handful of jobs will do that to a guy). Am I disheartened? Not really. Am I proud? Well, not as proud as I would be if I’d tried to give this more time and attention. Am I concerned that Luke Rolfes called me out on not finishing? Yes, it keeps me up at nights (not really, but it’s nice to get a shout-out on someone else’s blog). Regardless, I’m doing it next year and the year after that. I enjoy NaNoWriMo as an exercise and challenge. Plus, I legitimately like what I wrote. It’s the beginnings of a fun little self-aware satire that really could become something if I give it some time and effort (at least, a whole lot more than I gave it in November).

I’d be interested to hear from you, dear reader, if you attempted NaNoWriMo and of your end results.

-nm

P.S. – Earlier this month I promised the following blog posts before the year is out. It’s nice to cross off a few of them as finished, and I have projections for the rest:

  • Wrapping up last month’s NaNoWriMo. (Today!)
  • Wrapping up my first semester teaching at NCC. (Tomorrow morning!)
  • A link to my latest short film (now in the editing stage). (Tomorrow night, I swear!)
  • My top ten favorite blog posts of the year. (I think this will happen in January, just in case I have a flash of brilliance or two in the next eight or nine days.)
  • Finally, my long-promised recommendation of Five Books for Boys. (Expect this on Friday.)
  • Thoughts on Oprah’s Book Club. (This may also have to show up in January.)
  • Pros and cons of books as gifts. (Covered in last week’s Friday recommendation.)
  • A Writer’s New Year’s Resolutions. (January 1, 2009.)
  • New writing prompts and recommendations. (I’ve been on track, lately.)
  • A new Scrawlers contest! (Done and over – stay tuned for more in 2009.)
  • And, depending on how often I find myself with internet access, some daily blogging about a mission trip I’m co-leading down to Beaumont, Texas over the last week of the year. (Forthcoming…)
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NaNoWriMo – Day 19

After work I headed to my first ever live NaNoWriMo meet-up… no one was there. That’s a bummer, because it was the first meet-up that’s ever fit in my schedule. So I went to Perkins, got some coffee, and wrote some fun stuff. Here are my latest stats:

Day 13 Goal NaNoWriMo Word Count: 31,667/50,000 (56.6%)

Day 13 Actual NaNoWriMo Word Count: 6,236/50,000 (12.5%)

Word Count Difference: -25,431

Writing Sessions: 5

My Story: Getting very surreal, very fourth-wall breaking…

My Outlook: Good news, I broke the 10% wall! Bad news, not the 10,000 word wall.

HEY: If you’re attempting NaNoWriMo this year, feel free to post your own update in the comments section. You can use my format or invent your own.

ALSO: If you wanna buddy up, I’m on NaNoWriMo here.

-nm

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NaNoWriMo – Day 18

I kept my promise to myself and got some writing done. I’m definitely not getting up to 50,000 words by the end of the month but I’m going to get some good writing done on what’s turning out to be a fun story. Here’s the current rundown:

Day 13 Goal NaNoWriMo Word Count: 28,322/50,000 (56.6%)

Day 13 Actual NaNoWriMo Word Count: 4,884/50,000 (9.7%)

Word Count Difference: -23,438

Writing Sessions: 4

My Story: Chock-full of surprises!

My Outlook: 50,000 words is a lot, but I’m having fun!

I don’t know that I’ll have much time to write this week, but we’ll see…

HEY: If you’re attempting NaNoWriMo this year, feel free to post your own update in the comments section. You can use my format or invent your own.

ALSO: If you wanna buddy up, I’m on NaNoWriMo here.

-nm

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NaNoWriMo – Day 13

I have not sat down to write, but my word count has gone up! Thanks to a strange dyslexic anomaly, I inadvertently mis-reported my word count as 2,338 instead of my real word count, 2,883! WOW! So that means that as of today, my NaNoWriMo progress stands at:

Day 13 Goal NaNoWriMo Word Count: 21,658/50,000 (43.3%)

Day 13 Actual NaNoWriMo Word Count: 2,883/50,000 (5.7%)

Word Count Difference: -18,775

Writing Sessions: 2

My Story: I gained 1% by doing nothing!

My Outlook:I sure am doing a lot of nothing…

I will write this weekend. I must write this weekend. I write this weekend! :)

HEY: If you’re attempting NaNoWriMo this year, feel free to post your own update in the comments section. You can use my format or invent your own.

ALSO: If you wanna buddy up, I’m on NaNoWriMo here.

-nm

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NaNoWriMo – Day 11 (Morning Update)

Day 11 of NaNoWriMo has arrived and these numbers do not bode well:

Goal NaNoWriMo Word Count: 18,333/50,000 (36.6%)

Actual NaNoWriMo Word Count: 2,338/50,000 (4.7%)

Word Count Difference: -15,995

Writing Sessions: 2

My Story: Inching forward, but wow, what a start!

My Outlook: Optimism is not my strongest emotion right now.

Essay and test grading, as well as a few personal and work meetings and my trip to the Denver Improv Festival may have culminated this week in order to spell certain doom to this novel writing month. Can I eek out the word count I need? Let’s see what my update looks like tonight…

HEY: If you’re attempting NaNoWriMo this year, feel free to post your own update in the comments section. You can use my format or invent your own.

ALSO: If you wanna buddy up, I’m on NaNoWriMo here.

-nm